英语四级作文

专题一:旅游

1)有的人喜欢独自旅行，有的人喜欢与别人结伴而行 2)两种旅行方式的好处

3)你更喜欢哪种旅行方式，为什么? Travel Alone or Travel with a Companion? 行文思路

本题属于提纲式文字命题。提纲第1点指出两种不同的旅行方式，提纲第2点要求分别阐述两种旅行方式的好处，提纲第3点要求表明“我”的倾向，由此可判断本文应为对比选择型作文。

根据所给提纲，本文应包含如下内容：指出人们对旅行方式的不同偏好：有人喜欢独自旅行，有人喜欢结伴旅行;对比阐述独自旅行和结伴旅行各自的好处;表明“我”更喜欢于哪种旅行方式，并说明理由。 高分范文

travel Alone or Travel with a Companion?

[1]When it comes to traveling way， different people will offer different

opinions. [2]Some people like to travel alone， [2]while others prefer to travel with a companion. [3]Of course， everyone has his consideration for his preference. [4]Traveling alone， one can enjoy more freedom. The traveler can arrange his tour as he wishes without the trouble of humoring others. [3]Moreover， traveling alone [5]tend to bring the traveler [6]unexpected surprise， [7]such as making a new friend and enjoying a different scenery. [8]Compared with traveling alone， traveling with a companion has also its advantages. [3]For one thing， the group members can help and look after each other in the journey. [3]For another， [4]traveling with others who have same interest with， youu can share costs and experiences with them. [9]As to me， I prefer to travel with a companion. [3]Firstly， we can deal with the possible problems and difficulties in the journey. [3]Secondly， I like to share the pleasure of traveling with others. [3]In sum， [10]both traveling alone and traveling with a companion have their attractions， and you can find the pleasure from either one.

亮点点评

[1]“当涉及到或谈到…时”。

[2]用于提出两种不同的观点、态度或喜好。 [3]过渡衔接词语，使文章条理清晰、衔接紧密。 [4]现在分词短语作伴随状语。 [5]“倾向，趋于”。 [6]“意外的惊喜”。 [7]表示列举。 [8]“和…相比”。

[9]用于引出自己的观点或选择。 [10]“或者…，或者”。

英语三级、公共英语、商务英语考试佳句临摩

1.佳句：When it comes to traveling way， different people will offer different opinions.

临摩：当谈到是否应该取消“黄金周”假期时，人们的看法各不相同。 ____________________________________________.

2.佳句：Compared with traveling alone， traveling with a companion has also its advantages.

临摩：和城市相比，乡村的经济相对落后。

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3.佳句：Both traveling alone and traveling with a companion have their attractions， and you can find the pleasure from either one.

临摩：网络教学和传统教学都有其各自的优点，因此，我们应该将二者相结合。

_____________________________________. KEY：

1. When it comes to whether we should cancel the “golden week” holiday， different people will offer different opinions.

2. Compared with the cities， the countryside is relatively backward in economy. 3. Both network teachingand traditional school teaching have their advantages. Therefore， we should combine these two teaching ways.

专题二:大学生不健康生活习惯

1.部分大学生有不健康的生活习惯，例如：晚睡、过度消费、沉溺游戏。。。。 2.这种不健康生活习惯的危害 3.如何纠正

写作思路依然是上课反复强调的功能段落的写作思路：首段为负面现象描述(即提出问题)，二段为问题分析(危害)，尾段为建议措施。

It can be noticed that there are some unhealthy living habits among young people, especially college students. Typical examples include staying up late, being addicted to games, consuming in an inappropriate way. Thus, due attention should be paid to students’ daily habits.

Apparently, these bad habits may generate negative impacts. To begin with, they may impair students’ physical health and psychological fitness. In addition, what worries many teachers is that they may also exert negative influences on students’ academic performance. To conclude, never can we turn a blind eye to these phenomena.

In view of the seriousness of this issue, it is time that we took effective measure. Firstly, it is suggested that universities or colleges should cultivate students’

awareness of healthy living. Secondly, students themselves are well-advised to learn to regulate and control their own life appropriately. Only by doing so, can we hope to see the ideal scenes in which students enjoy their colorful and healthy life in Ivory Tower. (162 words)

专题三:大学生选老师

1.有些大学允许学生自由选择某些课程的任课教师 2.学生选择教师时所考虑的主要因素

3.学生自选任课教师的益处和可能产生的问题 On Students Selecting Lecturers 范文：

On Students Choosing Lecturers

Nowadays, some universities give students the right to choose who teaches some of their classes. This has led to some debate over whether students should be given this much power.

There are several factors that students consider when choosing a lecturer, including the teaching style of the lecturer, the lecturer's academic background, and the lecturer's reputation among students. The ideal lecturer is one who has an interesting teaching style, a diverse academic background, and a good reputation among students.

There are both positive and negative aspects to allowing students to choose their lecturers. Giving students the choice encourages them to take ownership for their classes, and also puts pressure on teachers to improve their teaching quality.

However, the factors that students consider might not be the ones that lead to the highest quality of education. Schools might end up with lecturers who teach interesting classes without much content.

专题四:保护非物质文化遗产

Protecting the Intangible Cultural Heritages 1.保护非物质文化遗产很重要 2.非物质文化遗产指的是…… 3.为保护非物质文化遗产我们应该…… 【精彩范文】

Protecting the Intangible Cultural Heritages

Like tangible cultural heritages such as the Great Wall and the Forbidden City, intangible cultural heritages like Peking Opera and Confucius-commemorating rituals are equally crucial. We should make our utmost efforts to preserve intangible heritages because, without their physical form of existence, they are in greater risk of extinction.

According to UNESCO’s Convention for the Safeguarding of Intangible Cultural Heritage (2003), all forms of social customs and habits, folklore, performing arts, rituals, oral traditions, festivals, traditional crafts and various knowledge and practices about nature and universe can be classified as intangible cultural heritages. As a country consisting of a great diversity of ethnic groups and with time-honored history and civilization, China abounds in intangible cultural heritages. Cultural heritages connect modern people with the historical past, allowing them to acquire a cultural and historical identity. Without cultural heritages, we would be rendered absolutely rootless and we would find it hard to cope with challenges at present and in the future.

However, the modernization process poses mounting threats to intangible heritages. Many people have a blind faith in the latest electronic devices. It is also pathetic to see elderly people in possession of such legacies pass away without transmitting them to the younger generation. Faced with those challenges, we should both preserve and renovate our ancestral heritages so that we can help contribute to the cultural diversity of the world and return to our spiritual homeland in this age of impersonal science and technology. 【参考译文】 保护非物质文化遗产

如同长城、故宫之类的物质文化遗产一样，像京剧和祭孔仪式这类非物质文化遗产，也同样至关重要。我们应不遗余力地去保护非物质遗产，因为它们在不具备物质存在的条件下，失传的可能性更加岌岌可危。

按照联合国教科文组织2003年通过的《保护非物质文化遗产公约》的界定，各种社会习俗、民俗、表演艺术、仪式、口头传统、节庆、传统手工艺、以及有关自然界与宇宙的知识与实践，全都可被纳入到非物质文化遗产的范畴。作为一个由众多族群构成的国家，并拥有悠久的历史与文明，中国有着极为丰富的非物质文化遗产。文化遗产将现代人与遥远的历史连接起来，使人们拥有某种文化和历史的认同感。如果没有文化遗产，我们的“根”便荡然无存。我们也无法去应对当下及未来的挑战。

然则，现代化进程正在对非物质文化遗产构成日甚一日的威胁。许多人盲目崇拜最新的电子产品。另外，看着掌握非物质遗产的老者不断逝去，而无法将其留传给年轻的一代，实在令人痛心。面对这些挑战，我们对祖辈的遗产既要继承，又要创新，这样，我们才能促进世界的文化多样性，并在一个缺少人情味的科学与技术的时代，重返我们的精神家园。 【值得熟记的句式与短语】

1. tangible cultural heritages物质文化遗产 2. Confucius-commemorating rituals祭孔仪式 3. make utmost efforts to不遗余力地去做…… 4. preserve intangible heritages保护非物质遗产 5. be in great risk of extinction灭亡的可能性很大

6. Convention for the Safeguarding of Intangible Cultural Heritage《保护非物质文化遗产公约》

7. oral traditions口头传统 8. traditional crafts传统手工艺

9. a great diversity of ethnic groups众多族群

10. time-honored history and civilization悠久的历史与文明 11. cultural and historical identity文化和历史的认同感

12. cope with challenges at present and in the future应对当下及未来的挑战 13. a blind faith盲目崇拜 14. ancestral heritages祖辈的遗产 15. cultural diversity文化多样性 16. spiritual homeland精神家园

17. age of impersonal science and technology缺少人情味的科学与技术的时代

2011年12月英语四级作文预测及范文：大学学习与高中学习的不同