读后续写专题
2020-2021学年江苏省高二下学期期末考试英语模拟试卷1 六、读后续写(满分25分)
47.阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。 Father’s Day Chess
It was Dale's third Sunday volunteering at the retirement home. He had thought it would be a good way to give back. But today he just felt tired. While on a short break, Dale took a walk through the garden. There were people sitting on benches, chatting together. A woman sat knitting, looking very pleased with herself. The strands of brightly-colored yarn disappeared quickly through her hands.
Across the courtyard, there was a man sitting alone at a table with a chessboard in front of him. Dale watched with curiosity as the man would stare at the pieces, then move them, and then would do the same from the other side of the board. On his way home after the day had ended, Dale found himself thinking about the man. How he was hunched over in deep thought, playing a game against himself. How odd, he thought.
Each Sunday, Dale would see the man doing the same thing. While everyone else talked with one another or happily carried on, the man would sit, slightly bent over and scratching his chin. His eyes rarely came off of the chessboard. One Sunday, Dale went to the garden on his break expecting to see the man at his normal spot. But he wasn't there. It was Father's Day and there were many visitors at the home. Dale shrugged and thought the man must be busy with his family.
That afternoon, Dale was mopping the hallways when he happened to pass by the man's room. The door was slightly open and he could see the man sitting in a chair next to the window, peering out at the courtyard. Dale knocked lightly and asked to come in.
The man nodded. Dale saw a collection of framed photographs on the bedside table. “Are those your children?” he asked.
“Yes, they’re all grown and live far away. They have their own kids now,” he replied. Dale, not wanting the man to be alone on Father's Day, had an idea. 注意:1. 续写词数应为150左右; 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Para. 1:
He went outside and got the chessboard from the table.
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Dale was glad that he volunteered.
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He went outside and got the chessboard from the table. “Shall we play chess together?\" The
man hesitated. He stared at the chessboard sinking into his thoughts. It took a while before the old man finally shared his thoughts with Dale. In the past, he often played chess with his children, which were some of his fondest memories. However, they all died because of a car accident and the old man has been alone ever since. \"Sorry, I lied to you,\" the man choked, eyes brimming with tears. “Thank you for your kind help.” Para. 2:
Dale was glad that he volunteered. Deeply touched, he now understood why the man
preferred to play chess alone, and why he sat silently in his room on Father's Day. He carefully placed all the pieces on the chessboard and said, \"Sir, I'm sorry for your loss. But as you may notice, I come here every Sunday. If you wish, you can play chess with me, as you did with your children. A flicker of a smile crossed the man’s face. Taking a deep breath, he settled himself opposite to Dale and moved a piece.
【分析】
本文以人物为线索展开,讲述了Dale在养老院做志愿者时注意到了一个孤独的父亲,每天都在下棋,他还发现这个人一个人过父亲节。于是这天Dale主动提出和老人下棋,老人告诉了Dale自己的孩子因为车祸去世的事情,最后Dale提出每周都可以和他下棋。 【详解】 1.段落续写:
①由第一段首句内容“他走到外面,从桌上拿起棋盘。”可知,第一段可描写老人告诉Dale自己孩子去世的遭遇。
②由第二段首句内容“Dale很高兴他做了志愿者。”可知,第二段可描写Dale得知后的心理活动以及Dale提出每周都可以和老人下棋。
2.续写线索:Dale拿起棋盘——老人告知自己经历——Dale高兴自己当了志愿者——Dale提出陪老人下棋 3.词汇激活 行为类
陷入沉思:sinking into his thoughts / be lost in thought 去世:die/ pass away
坐下:settled himself opposite to / sit down 情绪类
高兴:glad / happy 最爱的:fondest / favorite 【点睛】
[高分句型1] In the past, he often played chess with his children, which were some of his fondest memories. (运用了which引导非性定语从句)
[高分句型2] Deeply touched, he now understood why the man preferred to play chess alone, and why he sat silently in his room on Father's Day. (运用了why引导宾语从句) 2020-2021学年江苏省高二下学期期末考试英语模拟试卷2
47.阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写阿段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
At first glance she looked like any other old woman, plodding along in the snow ,alone,neglected,head bowed. A young couple, smiling,taking,laughing, arms loaded with Christmas presents,took no notice of the old woman. A mother with two small children hurried by, on their way to grandmother’s house. Like many others, they took no notice,either. If these people had noticed,they would have seen that the old woman wore no shoes. She walked bare foot in the ice and snow.
With both hands the old woman gathered her worn button-less overcoat at the collar to keep out the wind. She stopped and stood bent and bowed at the bus stop.A red and blue scarf covering her head, she waited for the downtown bus.
A gentleman carrying an Important looking briefcase waited near her,not too closely.After all,she could have something contagious (传染的). A teenage girl also waited for the bus,She glanced repeatedly at the old woman's feet, but said nothing.
The bus arrived and the old woman slowly, painfully boarded.She sat on the sideways sent Just behind the driver.The gentleman and the teenage girl hurried to the back of the bus.A little boy pointed at the old woman,\"Look,Mother,that old lady is bare foot.\"The embarrassed mother slapped his hand down. \"Don't point at people, Andrew. I's not polite to point.\" She looked out of the window.
"She must have sons or daughters,\" a lady in a fur coat suggested, “her children should be ashamed of themselves.\" She felt morally superior,because she took good care of her mother.
A man seated near the middle of the bus steadied the bag of gifts on her lap. \"Don't we pay enough taxes to handle situations like this?\" he said to a friend seated beside him.
“People have to learn to save their money,\" a well-dressed young college man added. “If that old woman had saved when she was young, she wouldn't be suffering now. It's her own fault.\"
And all these vain(虚荣的)people beamed with satisfaction that they had all given such deep analysis,totally ignoring the old woman who badly needed a pair of shoes immediately.
注意:续写词数应为150左右
A vain businessman felt offended by those talking without acting and reached into his wallet. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
At the next stop.a young man wearing expensive.new.brand-name shoes boarded the bus, ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________47
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vain
businessman felt offended by those talking without acting and reached into his wallet. He fished out a shiny $20 bill, walked straight to the woman and thrusted it to her wrinkled hand. Startled, the poor old lady looked up. Then, her painful expression softened and tears of gratitude began to roll down from her dull eyes. Hands trembling, throat tightening, voice shaking, she thanked the man a million of times. Obviously, the businessman’s honorable deed put shame to other vain passengers, who either hung their head or looked out of the window.
At the next stop, a young man wearing expensive, new, brand-name shoes boarded the bus. Upon seeing the lady’s blue and red bare feet, he took off his cool trainers and gestured the woman to put them on. Once again, tears pooled in the lady’s eyes. Other passengers were also deeply moved and they began to give away whatever they had to the old lady. What a loving scene it is if all of us could stop our meaningless comment and start to support those disadvantaged individuals with whatever little thing we can contribute! 【分析】
本文以人物为线索展开,讲述了一位老妇人在寒冷的冬天里光着脚乘上公交车,被虚荣的同行人指点嘲笑,但最终获得帮助的故事。 【详解】 1.段落续写:
①由第一段首句内容“一个自负的商人对那些说话不做的人感到生气,于是把手伸进钱包。”可知,第一段
可描写商人帮助老妇人的过程以及老妇人的反应。
②由第二段首句内容“在下一站,一个年轻人穿着昂贵的、崭新的、名牌的鞋子上了车。”可知,第二段可描写刚上车的年轻人将自己的鞋送给老妇人穿的经过。
2.续写线索:商人帮助——妇人感谢——乘客蒙羞——上车送鞋——深受感动——积极帮助 3.词汇激活 行为类
① 径直走向:go straight to/walk up to ② 颤抖:shake/tremble/quiver ③ 感谢:thank for/be grateful ④ 脱下:get off/take off 情绪类
① 生气:get angry/take offence/pissed off ② 羞愧:blush for/tuck one's tail 【点睛】
[高分句型1]. Obviously, the businessman’s honorable deed put shame to other vain passengers, who either hung their head or looked out of the window.(关系代词who引导的非限定性定语从句)
[高分句型2]. Other passengers were also deeply moved and they began to give away whatever they had to the old lady.(whatever引导名词性宾语从句)
[高分句型3]. What a loving scene it is if all of us could stop our meaningless comment and start to support those disadvantaged individuals with whatever little thing we can contribute!(由if引导条件状语从句)
2020-2021学年江苏省高二下学期期末考试英语模拟试卷3 六、读后续写(满分25分)
47.阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写的词数应为150左右。
“I wish my mother had a ring like those the ladies wear at the hotel,” said Hiram Green to
himself one day. Hiram was the son of a fisherman, but the fisherman had died when Hiram was a little boy. Hiram’s mother took on sewing work to earn money to support herself and her son. He helped her when he could out of school hours, and during vacation time. He had two uncles who had taught him how to catch shrimp (虾). With the money he earned by selling them he could buy things for his own use or pleasure. He had a “bank” almost full of what he called his “shrimp money.”
The sight of the flashing diamonds on the hands of some of the summer visitors at the fishing village in which he lived had added a new article to the list of beautiful things his mother would own someday. He had heard that just one single diamond was sometimes worth five hundred dollars or more. This had discouraged him very much.
But one day, he happened to pass a shop in the neighboring town and saw a number of diamond rings displayed in the window. He stopped fascinated, and pressed his face against the glass eagerly to see if any prices were marked upon them. Imagine his surprise when he saw upon the largest one—a tag (标签) marked $4.75. He looked again to see if he had made a mistake. Perhaps it was $475.00. But no, he knew enough about figures to see that he was right the first time.
He went home as fast as he could, and ran up into his bedroom. Then, he opened his “bank” and counted its contents. “Three dollars and twenty-two cents!” he cried. “I’ll have that ring before another week.” Hiram worked early and late for the next few days. He caught more shrimps than he had ever caught in the same length of time, and sold them readily. Paragraph 1:
At the end of the week he had the sum he desired.
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Years afterwards Hiram learned that what he had thought was a diamond was only a bit of glass.
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________47.One possible version At the end of the week he had the sum he desired. Hurrying to the shop where he had seen
the ring, before going inside he gave one swift, almost frightened look into the window. Could it be gone? No, there it was flashing and shining as before. That evening, he placed it on his mother’s finger. She looked at it in surprise. “It is yours, Mother,” he cried, proudly. “I bought it with my shrimp money.” “My dear boy,” said his mother, while something as bright as the shining stone flashed in her eyes, “not one of those ladies can value their rings as I shall value mine.”
Years afterwards Hiram learned that what he had thought was a diamond was only a bit of glass. “Did you know it then, Mother?” he asked. His mother nodded. “And you never told me.”
“It was brighter to me than any real diamond,” she said. “The brightness I saw flashing in it was the unselfish love of my boy.” Indeed, nothing in the world is more precious than a sincere heart. 【分析】
本文以时间为线索展开,讲述了小男孩Hiram Green想要给母亲买一个钻石戒指,但是这太贵了。有一天他突然发现在一家店里的一个钻石戒指只要4.75美元。他很激动,在一周后攒够了钱,买下了戒指送给母亲。母亲很珍惜。多年以后他才知道那只是一个玻璃,但母亲说这世上没有比这更珍贵的了。 【详解】 1.段落续写:
①由第一段首句内容“到周末,他得到了他想要的那笔钱。”可知,第一段可描写Hiram Green去买下了那个戒指送给了母亲。
②由第二段首句内容“多年以后,Hiram才知道他原来以为是钻石的东西其实只是一小块玻璃。”可知,第二段可描写Hiram询问母亲是否知道,母亲说虽然是玻璃,但这世上没有比这更珍贵的了。
2.续写线索:买戒指——送戒指——惊喜————珍惜 3.词汇激活 行为类
①放置:place/put ②闪耀:flash/twinkle ③珍惜:value/cherish 情绪类
①惊喜:surprise/amazement ②真诚的:sincere/frank 【点睛】
[高分句型1] Hurrying to the shop where he had seen the ring, before going inside he gave one swift, almost frightened look into the window. (运用了现在分词作状语和where引导的定语从句) [高分句型2] The brightness I saw flashing in it was the unselfish love of my boy. (运用了现在分词作后置定语)
2020-2021学年江苏省高二下学期期末考试英语模拟试卷4
47.阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使其构成一篇完整的短文。 注意
1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右;
2.续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好。
Recently divorced(离婚),I was in my 20s,had no job and was on my way downtown to the employment offices. I had no umbrella, and I could not afford another one. I sat down in the streetcar-and there against the seat was a beautiful silk umbrella with a silver handle.
I examined the handle and saw a name. The usual procedure would have been to turn in the umbrella to the conductor, but somehow I decided to take it with me and find the owner myself. Then I searched a telephone book for the name on the umbrella and found it. I called and a lady answered.
Yes, she said in surprise, that was her umbrella, which her parents, now dead, had given her for a birthday present. But,she added, it had been stolen more than a year before. She was so excited that I forgot I was looking for a job and went directly to her small house. She took the umbrella, her eyes filled with tears. We talked for a while, and I must have given her my address. I don't remember.
The next six months were tough. My last job ended the day before Christmas and my thirty-dollar
rent was soon due, and I had only fifteen dollars. When I walked from the streetcar to my small apartment, the air was full of the sound of Christmas merriment. But there should be no Christmas for me.Unless a miracle happened, I would be homeless in January, foodless, jobless.
Peggy, my daughter, had proudly set our kitchen table for our evening meal and put pans out and three cans of food which would be our dinner. When I looked at those pans and cans, I felt broken-hearted. We would have only hamburgers for our Christmas dinner tomorrow. I stood in the cold little kitchen and the coldness in my heart was colder than ice. Paragraph 1:
The doorbell suddenly rang and Peggy ran swiftly to answer it,calling that it must be Santa Claus.
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Our dinner that night was he most delicious I had ever eaten.
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________47.The doorbell suddenly rang and Peggy ran swiftly to answer it,calling that it must be Santa Claus.Then I heard a man talking heartily to her,so I went to the door.He was a deliver man.and his arms were full of
parcels.\"This is a mistake,\"I said,but he read the name on the parcels and they were for me.When he had gone I could only stare at the boxes.Peggy and I sat on the floor and opened them.A huge doll.Gloves.Candy.A beautiful leather purse.Incredible! I looked for the name of the sender.It was the lady.
Our dinner that night was the most delicious I had ever eaten.I forgot I had no money for the rent and only fifteen dollars in my purse and no job.My child and I ate and laughed together in happiness.We decorated the small Christmas tree with the gifts that we received Then Peggy fell asleep.Looking at her,I felt a sweet peace flooding me.I had some hope again. 【分析】
本篇书面表达是读后续写。通过阅读所给文章可知,本文讲述了作者20几岁时离婚后发生的两件事情,第一件事情是,作者坐车捡到一把漂亮的伞,并把伞还给物主;第二件事情是,圣诞节来临,生活拮据的作者和女儿将要过一个寒酸的圣诞节,这让作者感到心碎。 【详解】
续写部分分为两段,第一段开头是:门铃突然响了,Peggy急忙跑去开门,并大声说这一定是圣诞老人。所以应该写Peggy开门后的所见所闻以及接下来发生的事情,一位快递员上门,送来包裹,作者和女儿打开包裹,发现是丢雨伞的女士送的。第二段开头是:那天晚上的晚餐是我吃过的最美味的晚餐。本段应该写为何这是作者最美味的晚餐和最好的一个圣诞节,作者收到别人的礼物,感到幸福开心,困难的生活又有了希望。
续写时要求使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语增加了写作难度,我们要熟悉所给划线词语,恰当的时候加以运用。最后还要注意所续写短文的词数应为150左右;按要求完成写作任务。 【点睛】
本文描写详略得当,使用了高级词汇和高级句子。如:be full of,stare at,fall asleep等高级词汇;现在分词作状语…calling that it must be Santa Claus.,省略关系代词that的定语从句Our dinner that night was the most delicious I had ever eaten.,that引导定语从句We decorated the small Christmas tree with the gifts that we received 等高级句式。
2020-2021学年江苏省高二下学期期末考试英语模拟试卷5 六、读后续写(满分15分)
47.阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。
In 1945, a 12-year-old boy saw a beautiful brooch(胸针) in a shop window that set his heart racing. But the price—five dollars—was too high for Reuben Earle. Five dollars would buy almost a week's food for his family.
Reuben couldn't ask his father for the money. Everything his father made through fishing went to his mother, Dora. Slim and beautiful, she was the center of the home, the glue that held it together. The housework was never-ending, and she struggled to feed and clothe their five children but she was happy as her family and their well-being were all she cared about.
Nevertheless, he opened the shop's weathered(风化的) door and went inside. Standing proud and straight in his flour-sack(面粉袋改做的) shirt and washed-out trousers, he told the
shopkeeper what he wanted, adding ,“But I don't have the money right now. Can you please hold it for me for some time?”
“I'll try,” the shopkeeper smiled. “People around here don't usually have that kind of money to spend on things. It should keep for a while.”
Reuben respectfully touched his worn cap and walked out. He would raise the money and not tell anybody, for he thought Mum would get surprised when she saw that brooch. On hearing the sound of hammering from a side street, Reuben suddenly had an idea that he could raise money by selling the used nail bags(装钉子的麻袋). People built their own homes in Bay Roberts, using nails bought in bags from a local factory. Sometimes the used bags were thrown away at the construction site, and Reuben knew he could sell them back to the factory for five cents a piece.
That day he sold two nail bags and hid the money in a rusty soda tin(汽水罐). 注意:
1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右。
2. 应使用5个以上短文标有下划线的关键词语; 3. 续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好;
4. 续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词。 Paragraph 1
Every day after school, Reuben started his plan.__________________________________________________
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Paragraph 2
Finally, the time came!______________________________________________________________________
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47.Paragraph 1: Every day after school, Reuben started his plan. Cold and hungry, Reuben wandered the streets, searching for the nail bags carefully. To save more money, he even decided to deliver papers in the early morning. Exhausted and tired as he felt, he still stuck to the plan. It was the brooch in the shop window that reminded him that what he did was worthwhile. After a long time of hard work, he made it eventually.
Paragraph 2: Finally the time came! He took out the soda tin, poured the coins out and began to count. Five dollars! His hard work paid off! Holding the soda tin firmly, Reuben rushed for the shop to buy the brooch. The moment he got the beautiful brooch, he burst through the front door and placed it in Dora's hand. Never had Dora received such a gift. Speechless and happy, she held her son tightly into her arms, with tears welling up in her eyes. 【分析】
本文是一篇读后续写作文,考查学生的读写能力。要求考生用150词写出接下来的两段,且必须使用5个
以上文章中标出的关键词语,并标出这些关键词。 【详解】
考生在动笔前,一定要认真阅读所给故事,充分理解文字内容,认真看清题目要求,把握文章的脉络和串起文本的关键词,判断关键词语与主题内容的关联程度,在此基础上,确定要选用的词语以及所在的段落位置,判断故事情节发展的方向,写作下文。重点阅读每一段的首句,进行布局、解读,布局第一段的内容时,要兼顾两段的首句;第二段的首句决定第一段的走向。注意故事要连贯,要完整。同时注意综合运用语法与句法结构,按照行文逻辑组织语言,写作时要准确运用正确的时态。尽量使用自己会的单词、词组和句型,不要刻意追求运用高级、新颖的词汇,强行运用复杂句型等语法结构,而忽略了与原文语言环境的符合度和连贯度。最后也要注意不要出现单词拼写错误。 【点睛】
本文描写详略得当,使用了高级词汇和高级句子。如:Cold and hungry, Reuben wandered the streets, searching for the nail bags carefully.现在分词作伴随状语;The moment he got the beautiful brooch, he burst through the front door and placed it in Dora's hand.运用了the moment引导时间状语从句等高级句式。
2021届江苏省高二下学期期末英语考试题应用文写作专题
2020-2021学年江苏省高二下学期期末考试英语模拟试卷1
46.假如你是李阳,你的好友Jason写信告诉你,他很喜欢学校的课余活动,但又怕参加课余活动会占用高二的学习时间,请你用英语给好友Jason回信,就“参加学校课余活动”提建议,短文应包含以下要点: 1、写信目的;
2、你的建议(积极参加课余活动锻炼能力,聆听老师意见……); 注意:
1.词数:80字左右
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯. Dear Jason,
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________46.Dear Jason,
Glad to hear from you again. I learn from your letter that you have a preference for after-class activities, but you are concerned that taking part in the activities might take up a lot of time. I'm writing to offer you some suggestions on how to deal with the problem.
In my view, you are encouraged to participate in after-class activities, which enables you to improve your ability and shape your character. Second, it is suggested that you turn to your teachers for help, since they are experienced and willing to give you advice. Last but not least, it is of great importance to raise your efficiency and get accustomed to the schedule in Senior Two.
I hope that my suggestions can be of some help. I am certain that you are able to balance your study with the extra-curricular activities.
Looking forward to your reply. Yours sincerely, Li Hua 【分析】
本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生用英语给好友Jason回信,就“参加学校课余活动”提建议。 【详解】 1.词汇积累
高兴的:happy →glad
担心:worry about →be concerned that 处理:handle →deal with
在我看来:In my opinion= In my view 2.句式拓展 简单句变为复合句
原句:I hope that my suggestions can be of some help.
拓展句:I sincerely hope that the suggestions which I give you can be of some help for you. 【点睛】
[高分句型1] In my view, you are encouraged to participate in after-class activities, which enables you to improve your ability and shape your character.这句话运用了which引导的非性定语从句。 [高分句型2] I learn from your letter that you have a preference for after-class activities, but you are concerned that taking part in the activities might take up a lot of time.这句话运用了动名词作主语。
2020-2021学年江苏省高二下学期期末考试英语模拟试卷2
46.假定你是李华,是你校英语俱乐部的成员。今年是中国党诞辰一百周年,你校英文报“双 语话中国”(“Talk about China to the world\")栏目录制了红色故事系列视频。现面向全校学生招聘志愿者为该系列视频配英文解说。请你为此写一份招聘启事,内容包括: 1.目的
2.条件(擅长英语表达;了解党史;热爱传播红色精神等) 3.报名邮箱:Englishclub@ ahschool. com 注意:
1.词数100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯; 3.短文题目已为你写好。
参考词汇:中国党 the Communist Party of China (CPC) 解说 narrate 46.A Volunteer Wanted
To celebrate the 100t birthday of the Communist Party of China, our column has made several videos featuring Red Stories of the CPC. Some volunteers interested in narrating the videos are wanted.
Firstly, applicants should have a good command of English. Speaking fluent English is a must. Secondly, it is important to know much about the history of the CPC, which may help you better understand the red stories. Last but not least, it is our duty to spread the good spirit of the Party. Therefore, whoever is enthusiastic about it is preferred.
Come and join us soon. If you can't wait to sign up, please send your application to Englishclub@ahschool.com. 【分析】
本篇书面表达是一篇应用文。要求考生写一份招聘启事,面向全校学生招聘志愿者为该系列视频配英文解说。 【详解】 第一步:审题 体裁:应用文
时态:根据提示,时态应为一般现在时。 结构:总分法
总分法是指把主题句作为总说,把支持句作为分说,并以这种方式安排所写内容。 要求: 1.目的
2.条件(擅长英语表达;了解党史;热爱传播红色精神等) 3.报名邮箱:Englishclub@ ahschool. com 第二步:列提纲(重点词组)
interested in;have a good command of ;help sb. do sth.;spread the good spirit of the Party;can't wait to do sth.;sign up 第三步:连词成句
1.To celebrate the 100t birthday of the Communist Party of China, our column has made several videos featuring Red Stories of the CPC.
2.Some volunteers interested in narrating the videos are wanted. 3.Applicants should have a good command of English. 4.Speaking fluent English is a must.
5.It is important to know much about the history of the CPC, which may help you better understand the red stories.
6.It is our duty to spread the good spirit of the Party. 7.Whoever is enthusiastic about it is preferred. 8.Come and join us soon.
9.If you can't wait to sign up, please send your application to Englishclub@ahschool.com. 根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态的问题。 第四步:连句成篇(衔接词)
1.表文章结构顺序:Firstly,Secondly,Last but not least 2.表因果关系:Therefore
连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰, 第五步:润色修改 【点睛】 [高分句型1]
To celebrate the 100t birthday of the Communist Party of China, our column has made several videos featuring Red Stories of the CPC.(动词不定式作目的状语)
[高分句型2]
It is important to know much about the history of the CPC, which may help you better understand the red stories.(it作形式主语,动词不定式为真正的主语,which引导非性定语从句)
2020-2021学年江苏省高二下学期期末考试英语模拟试卷3
46.假如你是李华,是某国际学校的学生会。你发现有些同学迫于同伴间的压力,在过生日时经常攀比谁买的生日礼物好。请你用英语写一封倡议信,发表在你校校园网上,呼吁同学们不要攀比。 内容包括:
1. 互相攀比的危害; 2. 对生日礼物的建议; 3. 向同学们发出倡议。 注意:1. 词数80词左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。 Dear students,
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
The Students’ Union 46.Dear students,
There is a disturbing trend in our school that some students are forced to spend lots of money buying expensive birthday gifts for their friends. This results from peer pressure.
It is really a waste of time and money to compare whose gift is the most fashionable or expensive. In fact, teenagers have many ideas about creative but inexpensive birthday gifts. For example, we can take a cycling trip, which will be for sure a good memory in our life.
Therefore, boys and girls, please save your money and use it properly when you are deciding to buy an expensive gift.
The Students’ Union 【分析】
本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生一封倡议信,发表在你校校园网上,呼吁同学们不要攀比。 【详解】 第一步:审题 体裁:应用文
时态:根据提示,时态主要为一般现在时和一般将来时。 结构:总分法
总分法指把主题句作为总说,把支持句作为分说,并以这种方式安排所写内容。 要求:
1. 互相攀比的危害; 2. 对生日礼物的建议; 3. 向同学们发出倡议。 第二步:列提纲 (重点词组)
disturbing; spend lots of money doing sth.; peer pressure; a waste of; fashionable; take a cycling trip; memory; save money; properly; decide to 第三步:连词成句
1. There is a disturbing trend in our school that some students are forced to spend lots of money buying expensive birthday gifts for their friends. 2. This results from peer pressure.
3. It is really a waste of time and money to compare whose gift is the most fashionable or expensive.
4. In fact, teenagers have many ideas about creative but inexpensive birthday gifts. 5. For example, we can take a cycling trip, which will be for sure a good memory in our life. 6. Therefore, boys and girls, please save your money and use it properly when you are deciding to buy an expensive gift.
根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。 第四步:连句成篇(衔接词)
表因果关系:Therefore
连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰。 【点睛】
[高分句型1] For example, we can take a cycling trip, which will be for sure a good memory in our life. (运用了which引导非性定语从句)
[高分句型2] Therefore, boys and girls, please save your money and use it properly when you are deciding to buy an expensive gift. (运用了when引导时间状语从句) 2020-2021学年江苏省高二下学期期末考试英语模拟试卷4
46.2022年冬奥会将在北京和张家口举行。为了确保冬奥会完满成功, 组委会发起了志愿者招募活动。假如你是学生李华, 希望能成为其中一员。请用英文给组委会写一封申请信。 内容包括:1个人情况;2自身优势;3服务承诺 注意: 1. 词数100左右
2. 可以适当增加细节, 以使行文连贯; 3. 开头和结尾已给出, 不计入总词数。 Dear Sir/Madam,
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours faithfully, Li Hua 46.范文: Dear Sir/Madam,
My name is Li Hua. I would like to work as volunteer for 2022 Beijing-Zhangjiakou Winter
Olympic Games.
I'm a boy of eighteen years old from, a high school. My spoken English is good and I can communicate with foreigners fluently. What’s more, I have other advantages. I'm especially fond of sports, familiar with Beijing, good at communication and always glad to help others. I'm willing to provide the best service for every athlete in Winter Olympic Games. Therefore, I think I'm suitable for serving the Games.
I would appreciate it if you could offer me the chance to a volunteer. Thank you! Yours faithfully, Li Hua 【分析】
本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生给冬奥组委会写一封申请信,希望能成为一名志愿者。 【详解】 第一步:审题 体裁:应用文
时态:根据提示,时态主要为一般现在时和一般将来时。 结构:总分法
总分法指把主题句作为总说,把支持句作为分说,并以这种方式安排所写内容。 要求: 1个人情况; 2自身优势; 3服务承诺 第二步:列提纲
spoken English; communicate with foreigners fluently;be fond of sports; be familiar with Beijing; be good at communication; be glad to help others; provide the best service;;be suitable for 第三步:连词成句
1. My name is Li Hua. I would like to work as volunteer for 2022 Beijing-Zhangjiakou Winter
Olympic Games.
2. My spoken English is good and I can communicate with foreigners fluently. 3. What’s more, I have other advantages.
4. I'm especially fond of sports, familiar with Beijing, good at communication and always glad to help others.
5. I'm willing to provide the best service for every athlete in Winter Olympic Games. 6. Therefore, I think I'm suitable for serving the Games.
7. I would appreciate it if you could offer me the chance to a volunteer. 根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。 第四步:连句成篇
1.表并列补充关系:What is more 2.表因果关系:Therefore
连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰。 【点睛】
[高分句型1] Therefore, I think I'm suitable for serving the Games.(运用省略连接词that的宾语从句以及高级短语be suitable for )
[高分句型2] I would appreciate it if you could offer me the chance to a volunteer.(运用it作形式宾语)
2020-2021学年江苏省高二下学期期末考试英语模拟试卷5
46.假定你是李华。你的美国笔友Tom对中国文化有浓厚的兴趣。恰好你校今年暑假将为外国学生举办一场汉语夏令营活动(Chinese Summer Camp),请你给他发一封电子邮件邀请他加入,内容包括: 1.时间和地点;
2.内容:学习日常汉语、了解中国历史和传统文化等; 3.报名方式和截止时间。
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
46.One possible version: Dear Tom,
Here comes a piece of good news. Chinese Summer Camp, which is intended for international students, is going to be held in our school this summer vacation. Since you are obsessed with Chinese culture, I'd like to invite you to join it.
The Camp is scheduled to last 11 days, from July 18 to July 28. It covers a wide variety of cultural activities, ranging from studying Chinese daily expressions to attending some lectures on Chinese history and traditional culture. By doing these activities, I believe you will definitely gain a better understanding of China and its culture.
If you want to participate in this Camp, please sign up for it before July 2nd at our school website. Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours, Li Hua
【分析】
本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生给美国笔友Tom发一封电子邮件,邀请他加入学校今年暑假为外国学生举办的汉语夏令营活动。 【详解】 第一步:审题 体裁:应用文
时态:根据提示,时态主要为一般现在时,少量一般将来时。 结构:总-分-总法
要点: 1.时间和地点;
2.内容:学习日常汉语、了解中国历史和传统文化等; 3.报名方式和截止时间。 第二步:列提纲 (重点词组)
Chinese Summer Camp;a piece of good news;be intended for;be going to;be obsessed with;Chinese culture;a wide variety of;range from…to…;Chinese daily expressions;gain a better understanding of;participate in;sign up for;look forward to 第三步:连词成句
1. Here comes a piece of good news. Chinese Summer Camp, which is intended for international students, is going to be held in our school this summer vacation.
2. Since you are obsessed with Chinese culture, I'd like to invite you to join it. 3. The Camp is scheduled to last 11 days, from July 18 to July 28.
4. It covers a wide variety of cultural activities, ranging from studying Chinese daily expressions to attending some lectures on Chinese history and traditional culture.
5. By doing these activities, I believe you will definitely gain a better understanding of China and its culture.
6. If you want to participate in this Camp, please sign up for it before July 2nd at our school website.
7. Looking forward to your early reply.
根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。 第四步:连句成篇(衔接词)
1.表并列补充关系:and;As well as, not only…but (also), including(供参考) 2.表条件关系:if;
3.表因果关系:Since;Because, As(供参考)
连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰。
【点睛】
[高分句型1] Here comes a piece of good news.(使用了完全倒装句)
[高分句型2] Chinese Summer Camp, which is intended for international students, is going to be held in our school this summer vacation.(使用了由which引导的非性定语从句)
[高分句型3] It covers a wide variety of cultural activities, ranging from studying Chinese daily expressions to attending some lectures on Chinese history and traditional culture.(使用了现在分词作状语)
[高分句型4] If you want to participate in this Camp, please sign up for it before July 2nd at our school website.(使用了由if连接的状语从句)
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